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Death - you win
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Death - you win |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas 
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A heart that used to beat has stopped - A face that used to smile...does not. Eyes that used to cry - are dried Dreams that used to be have died ! Stars that used to shine are dim Anger - bitterness now within - For I have died... For I have died... For I have died... and now you win.......... ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet [This message has been edited by poetFemmeFatale (edited 07-29-99).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Poet....again another fine piece. It speaks volumes in very few words. Sometimes they only win for a short while though...that anger, that bitterness, all of that shall too pass. Life goes on and so do we unless we choose no to. May God Bless Ruth ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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guiltborn Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 30South Dakota |
i love your poetry, it seems to cut straight to the point. This poem cut straight to my heart because in a way, i relate very much to this poem. ------------------ --------------------- "What dreams may come?" Guiltborn |
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Princess Lily Member
since 1999-07-13
Posts 149USA |
Keep up the great work!!~Lily ------------------ We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe *A rose is a rose it withers and dies...so long as you keep it the memories stay alive* |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I enjoyed this as I enjoy all your work! You do have a talent! |
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