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Open Poetry #1
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tim123
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since 1999-07-28
Posts 2
Garden Grove, Ca
0 posted 1999-07-28 06:17 PM

This is a song I wrote a while back, but thought it might translate nicely to poetry... Let me know what you think. Be kind!

All the people in my life
have turned on me
And buried here deep in dispare
Anger and hatered are all I see

Pain grows deeper everyday
And it's killing my soul
And everyday my heart beats a little faster
from chasing disolving goals

So many times my cries
fell upon unkind ears
Running in circles, but moving in reverse
Now I give into my fears
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leelew
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since 1999-07-10
Posts 89
highmount,ny,usa
1 posted 1999-07-28 09:53 PM

Nicely done!Ease to follow,and heartfelt.
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