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ChickenLittle New Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 2 |
Loving from afar Wishing on a star Wishing that you'll be Spending life with me Wishing you were here Wishing you were near Feelings changing though Turning cold as snow Hurting me so bad Making me so sad Wishing i were dead Turning life to lead Burdening my heart Unwilling to start Loving another Hating your lover Regretting my life Swimming in strife Drowing soon to come Wishing it were done Waiting for the end Breaking heart won't mend Wanting you back now Wishing i nkew how Wishing you could feel Suffering this real Wishing that you could Knowing that you should Unforgiving pain Never ending rain Knowing i must die Hoping you don't cry Dying from inside Wanting suicide hoping it is quick Slicing with this bic opening my vein Releasing all the pain Letting go my tears Building up these years Healing all my hurt starting the dying Ending the crying Darkening to black Coming never back Wishing you were mine Hoping that you're fine |
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Blue Junior Member
since 1999-07-03
Posts 14Florida |
You are a very talented writer, and whoever you wrote this about must have been horrible to you. I love your poem and you should post more. |
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angel girl Member
since 1999-07-23
Posts 322within a whisper... |
great job chickenlittle! you have a great way of writing. |
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chicken Junior Member
since 2003-07-27
Posts 44 |
why didi u stop writing if u still come on here all though i doubt u dont u should this poem is gr8 |
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