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Ayla
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since 1999-08-31
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0 posted 1999-08-31 12:52 PM


I know that you'll never break,
This fragile heart of mine.
My feelings for you are in the dark,
Something I doubt you'll ever find.

I love the way you walk,
Without a care in the world.
And the way you talk,
Made me feel like a special girl.

But I was so afraid,
That you'll find out how I feel.
So to keep my secret safe,
I avoided talking to you.

I do hope for the day,
To look at you straight in the eye.
Laugh along at your jokes,
Sit with you side by side.

I dont ask for much.
So I'm quite contented,
To be secretly in love with you.
In this way,I'm sure...
This fragile heart you'll never break.


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You do not love a woman because she is beautiful,a woman is beautiful because you love her.

[This message has been edited by Ayla (edited 08-31-99).]

© Copyright 1999 Ayla - All Rights Reserved
Areya
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since 1999-06-26
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1 posted 1999-08-31 01:19 PM


Been there Ayla... and very well written too
RosePetal
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since 2001-08-26
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2 posted 2002-02-11 05:54 PM


awww well i hope u tell him your feelings, you never know what will develop!
its been 3 years? i'll bet you are going out with him by now

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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3 posted 2003-01-04 04:25 AM


well, I know this...too well.
Ems
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since 2002-09-22
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England
4 posted 2003-06-15 02:13 PM


This is a lovely poem, and i'm sure lots of people can relate to what you've written
lilkittywoundering
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since 2003-03-24
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SF,SD
5 posted 2003-08-14 04:06 AM


very good!!! I feel this way about someone right now. keep on writting!!!!!
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