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My keystroke Lover...( It might be YOU !! ) :)
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My keystroke Lover...( It might be YOU !! ) :) |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas 
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I have to say that 4 individuals inspired me to write this poem today...they are: E-mail Love by poet deVine....A stream of digits by blueloon....Cyber Seas by the infamous Ron....and Mike, who posted his version on E-mail Love by deVine... The following was created for everyone in this room - for every poet, and every participant ...LOL .........................My Keystroke Lover................................. Such a safe Cyber sanctuary - minds can fall in love "real time" Such a beautiful encounter when your keystrokes meet with mine... I sit here as you type & take the journey through your heart - Your words become our foreplay on the screen - it's quite like art..... You share with me - I share with you Unselfish with our time - I read your lines of poetry... How beautifully they rhyme.... I'm falling deep in love now - Not because I see your face - But because I know your soul inside That sacred - secret place... Funny - how the Net finds two - Allows their screens to mesh... Brings them to a room so intimate Erotic minds & not the flesh... Your rhymes they cause my heart to soar - sometimes I laugh or sigh -- How stimulating words can be In your world of verse - I fly !! I may never know your name - and may never see your face... But you are my keystroke lover With our poems.....we embrace.... ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
I must confess I am confused, By your cyber love confessions. Now my fingers are feeling used, And they gotten testosterone aggressions. They used to be much softer, when I posted here this morning. Now they sense love in the cyber winds, And they're hammering out this warning. My whole body isn't mine to share, With a cyber queen or princess. But I if loaned my fingers, on a dare, Would you make them type til senseless? I liked your poem. It was erotic. I hope you find that person. :-) |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Well, I'm really not LOOKING for someone to torture into LOVE...however, flipping back through the pages of this forum earlier today, I noticed this topic kept coming up! I thought it would be fun to write something that we could probably all confess to experiencing at one time or another...And I must confess, some of you guys in here could "TALK" me into anything! LOL I've never seen so many smooth talking Romeos in one room before in my entire life!! I loved your addition to mine - I laughed and laughed and laughed & felt I'd violated you ! That absolutely made my day! Many thanks - you're very talented...I like your stuff...  ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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r. baker33 Member
since 1999-07-03
Posts 55glen easton wv |
gosh i almost fell off my chair again! there is one thing i want to say. your good,very very good.it was like candy for my eyes.i was reading,and for just a moment it was like i have known you forever thanks for the beautiful words. p.s. at least you will know my name. my given name is Richard. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Poet...I am totally in agreement with this one. It is amazing how words can touch hearts. Very nicely done! Discovery and Wonder Two souls... Reaching out... Find each other. Two worlds... Brought together... By untold circumstances. Amazing... How words typed on a blank screen... Can so touch ones heart. And she can’t help but wonder... What things would be like... If only in a different time and space. ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Hoot Owl, I really liked your addition...very nice. Thanks for sharing ! I think this poem has scared people away...LOL It's not gotten the response I thought it would, but it's one of my favorites.... ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I must confess, I'm quite besotted by all the poets in this place the way I leave from work each day is like a drag car race. Seeing who's been on and wrote new poems that are zingers finding out if someone replied to something from my fingers! Cyber-netically we connect and are surprised to find a friend and as such, I certainly know just when this poem should end. Now.  Loved this all! I'm so glad you were inspired! It's nice to know something I wrote made an impression on someone. [This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 07-27-99).] |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Femme I'm glad I was able to jest with you. I liked your poem, and I enjoyed my riposte. You write so beautifully. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Well, I think this poem is terrific. And accurate. We do form bonds here, through our poetry, that may never have been formed in life. Admiration is a form of love in my book. And we admire for the best reasons....by what is inside of the person, not looks, job title, wealth or status...but by the way they think, write and treat others. I would be happy to be your cyber-lover, PoetFemme Fatale, because I love what you do. |
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blueloon Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 161NY |
Thank you my dear PoetFemmme Fatale for the flattery that you have displayed. It is amazing how we all connect. blueloon |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Dearest Balladeer - Well, r.Baker33 fell out of his chair when he read my poem here - now it's my turn to fall out of MY chair ! I'm so appreciative of your comments and for your liking my works - rather flattered would be a better phrase ! Your poetry is superb, and I strive to be but a fraction of that....Thanks for taking the time to reassure me in what I do...I love your work, Balladeer, so we're already mental lovers.... So glad you see it as I do...so glad...------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet [This message has been edited by poetFemmeFatale (edited 07-28-99).] |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Thank you everyone for your comments on this piece !! I was really curious as to how it would go over -- seems to have stirred up many different emotions ! Really appreciate all the comments & criticism -- that helps me know what my readers like or don't like...I'm working on "brushing up" & expanding my project of a self -published book, and I really need to know what the people enjoy reading! Thanks a million !!------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
This one is GREAT! It's so sweet-by the way, who IS your "keystroke lover"??? |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Now surely you're not asking a girl to kiss & tell ! I must admit, with all the Romeos - I have a favorite or two in here.....that's all I'm saying - my lips are sealed !! All your comments are greatly appreciated Elizabeth !!------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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r. baker33 Member
since 1999-07-03
Posts 55glen easton wv |
thanks for your reply. i really am hooked. i guess we are all in the same boat. p.s. my name is Richard not ronald ooops. ha.ha.hee. hee. |
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r. baker33 Member
since 1999-07-03
Posts 55glen easton wv |
maybe we should start a chapter of poets annonymous. Richard |
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blueloon Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 161NY |
Richard--I am afraid to admit but I think I need a program. Admiting you need help is the first step right? blueloon |
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pusskatt Junior Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 30Austrralia |
loved it!.... and met my husband that way too! |
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nicnac8 Junior Member
since 1999-07-28
Posts 46New York, N.Y. USA |
wow! that was great. i think uv made alot more people feel way more comfortable - i most certainly am. thankx |
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r. baker33 Member
since 1999-07-03
Posts 55glen easton wv |
hey its me again.i tried to get in adult fourm,and see your newest, but didn't have the pass word. how do ya like that 33 years young,and still can't get in.anyway i am glad its a hit.maybe someday i'll get to see it.oh by the way don't worry about messin up my name.my 13 year old son got tired of saying hey yo Richard,he then shortened to hey yodard hee. hee. that is how i got my email name it's yodard33.now you know the rest of the story.good night. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Hey, I think Elizabeth is still wondering who my "Cyber-Lover" is...I said I wouldn't tell, but I'm not good at keeping secrets.....I'm almost ready to spill it !!! Read this over again, and give me your guesses!!! ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Gosh! Ah, er..hm...hope it's not me!  Not that there's anything wrong with that! LOLIt's hard (no pun) not to have a few favorites here - but I think you should wait a few days before you reveal who it is..keep them on their toes. |
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pen of passion Member
since 1999-08-11
Posts 234 |
I can't believe what I've gotten myself into...all this flirting going on. Great poem. |
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