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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas 
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You are so close... i can feel you breathe - yet so far away... i just can't believe - when i'm near you... that you're not mine - i can't touch your lips... please give me some time - to reach down inside... and be everything - that you've ever wanted... i'll become your dream. ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Not even 1 tiny reply on this pathetic thing? At least tell me how bad it sucks?? Let's try this again....heh heh. ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
ok here PFF, I'm weeping ALL over my keyboard. It amazes me how much emotion you can project from so few words! (And it DIDN'T suck!) ------------------ ...the things I did not know at first, I learned by doing twice. -Billy Joel |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
What do ya mean it sucks?! Gee - I have to work really hard to get replies sometimes!!! There's so many of us on here...I quite liked this actually - it reminds me of my poem 'Accidental Passing' - in content. (Sucks...tch tch, don't put your work down!) |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
DREAM LOVER Dream lover, You come to me. You fill the need, You plant the seed. Passion arises, Slowly incises. Sensations burn, Souls cry and yearn. A fleshly tingle, Two bodies, single. Fountains flow, Faces glow. In arms clinched tight, Embraced by night. Impeached by dawn, I wake, you're gone. Michael |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
I'm flattered you WROTE THIS FOR ME !??? Right? Right? Very sensual piece....very nice.... Thanks for all the very uplifting comments!  ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Wow, PoetFemmeFatale, I do believe that we do truly think very much alike..you express this so beautifuly...I've been there..(but now I'm "his dream", or so he says). Wonderful job! ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "If I could be an angel, I'd make your every wish come true. But I am only human, just a woman lovin' you..." Trisha Yearwood |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You grab the collar of my emotions and pull me right against your face every time. |
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Haskins Member
since 1999-06-26
Posts 85Dallas, TX |
The quiet desperation of the soul and skin. A subtle ode to the interdependency of the human spirit. A vulnerable longing and a thirst unquenchable. ------------------ William Haskins AKA The Mad Monk http://www.ionstorm.com/public/haskins/inner_sanctum.htm |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Thank you so much everybody - you guys are too kind....I love each & every one of you ! ~~smooches ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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