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the price of silence

crocodileo77
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since 1999-08-16

Posts 1

0 posted 1999-08-16 09:38 PM

silence

through the open window of of my being
I hear the ever present fanfare of life
echos of memories ring in my ears as the
clattering din of of future events horrifies and
pushes me forward

does this noise ever cease to be
does it ever receed into
silence

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

1 posted 1999-08-16 09:43 PM

It does, friend, but not in a good way. Very well written.

elvira
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since 1999-07-06

Posts 936
California

2 posted 1999-08-16 09:46 PM

Welcome to the forums, croco

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

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Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

3 posted 1999-08-16 09:54 PM

Nicely done....

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

4 posted 1999-08-16 10:34 PM

I agree with Balladeer, nice job.

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