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Come away with me.. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas 
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Come away with me now to that land far away - Where the sun always shines - Where the night is always day... Where your kiss becomes the sun - Your embrace a gentle breeze... That blows and sways my heart - Like the winds across the seas. Your touch becomes the castle - In my land of fantasy... The air of sultry shores of love - the air of history... You'll be my knight in armor, and I'll be your princess fair - Together we will become one - the theme of love we'll share....... ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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Delores Hall Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 342USA |
Would it be nice if every one could have a knight in shining armor? |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
A what in shining what ?? What's that?? **chuckle** Yeah, when naked men fall from the sky, as I say! ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
This is nice PFF, but I'd rather spend a "knight" in your... I'll stop now, before I get in trouble... (I think it's time for me to get my *%@ into the adult forum! ------------------ ...the things I did not know at first, I learned by doing twice. -Billy Joel [This message has been edited by Christopher (edited 08-15-99).] |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Here we have one of the gems I missed while I was teaching this summer - I'm so glad it surfaced - It's just beautiful!!...  |
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Sue Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 383France |
We can all dream, and you do it so beautifully. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Thanks Nan - your comment is so genuine...I wrote one for a teacher of mine in high school many years back (MANY) and it's in here, quite a ways back, but I think you'd like it.....I'm not sure if you read it the first time it went through.....Look it up if you want.... ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
There are SO MANY lines I could use her but, aside from the fact I would be banned for life, I wouldn't use them anyway because no flippant comment should detract from the absolute beauty of this poem. Beautiful. |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Wow, so very beautiful poetFemmeFatale. I loved the entire theme, the flow, everything...  ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "If I could be an angel, I'd make your every wish come true. But I am only human, just a woman lovin' you..." Trisha Yearwood [This message has been edited by Alwye (edited 08-16-99).] |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Balladeer, your comments are so welcome...they mean so much coming from someone as great as thou art !! Much appreciated, believe me....***curtsies*** "You sure were a beautiful baby......" (singing to you).. ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Alwye, also a big thanks to you!! I tell everyone in here, you & I are so much alike I think....our thoughts and opinions...I read your poems & comments, and you always remind me of me!! ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
To PFF, The dreams of dreams fly high and seldom carry the cargo why, So why not fly. Loved your poem. |
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juanita Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 68Los Angeles, CA, USA |
PFF, thank you for this beautiful, beautiful poem. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Femme - err, ahh... yanno, I AM just a weak man. You DID know that didn't you? This is a terrific poem, with well-thought out direction and flow. As for the Knight in shining armor - on summer days this armor I wear gets really really hot |
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graham Member
since 1999-07-31
Posts 60South Yorkshire, England |
yep...Like it!! :-) |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Well, I haven't had my two cents worth yet! My gosh - this encaptures your talent completely. I find myself swaying off into a fantasy land, just reading this. Too short - make it longer so I don't have to leave so soon! It's great Pff, really really awesome. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
You'd only been with us two days when you posted this lovely piece. I'm afraid when a newbie posts, they try to put as many on the forum as possible the first time out and some of them get overlooked. I wish we could get the word out that we like to look at gems like these one at a time...slowly....to savor the rich beauty and clarity! Loved this PFF!  [This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 08-16-99).] |
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chanelle New Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 9canada |
How beautiful...i believe that dreams can come true and fairy tales can happen. I love the way you write...hope you've found your knight my dear...i'm still looking for mine. |
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DarkChiild Junior Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 18 |
A beautiful poem... I think we all can relate. Hope you find your man. |
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Terri Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 82Turtle Creek, PA |
Loved it! But then again, I've always been a sucker for the knight in armor fantasy...(wink, wink) |
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Artur Hawkwing Member
since 1999-06-30
Posts 444USA |
You didn't get that many responses earlier, now that you've brought it back to the surface, you have a million responses! I stand in awe of this poem, the fantasy world you have created - I can almost think I am peering through the wicked witch of Oz's crystal ball plotting some disaster. hehe just kidding... I would never think about ruining your fantasy dreams. Great one, liked it! |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Beautiful! ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this very much!!! Great job! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh PFF this soooo beautiful, well done |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Great pillow thoughts..:-)) HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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pen of passion Member
since 1999-08-11
Posts 234 |
A beautiful poem. For one minute I was drugged. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Fantabulous! I loved this, and am so mad at myself for missing it earlier. Sometimes airhead701 (me) doesn't know where her mind is! Good work. ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Absolutely beautiful! I loved it. Truly romantic! |
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IsabelleSkye Member
since 1999-06-27
Posts 253 |
I can't form a reply, I'll just tell you how this made me feel....my heart aches so, tears sting my eyes. I feel like my breath is caught in my chest. Hows that for how wonderful this poem is? *sniff* The Very Melancholy I.Skye |
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Colin Senior Member
since 1999-06-05
Posts 596Callington, Cornwall, England |
What Izzy said *8( ------------------ I believe in fairy tales but then I'm just a silly romantic, what do I know? |
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Cinderella Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 152Arizona |
You'll be my knight in armor, and I'll be your princess fair...splendid thoughts I share with you in my fantasies-wonderful PFF! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
A love that can be felt, meets our needs and can be felt when we reach out as well, says it all...a rippling lake, a view from a mountain, sharing a sunset, either side of the rainbow but each seeing the colours of love... So deep and meaningful... HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Kyle_R Junior Member
since 1999-08-23
Posts 12Honolulu, HI, USA |
marvelous. simply beautiful. so delicate yet sends such a strong message to the heart. :-) -Kyle [This message has been edited by Kyle_R (edited 08-23-99).] |
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