Open Poetry #1 |
Camelot Fantasia |
Magic Bunny Junior Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 18 |
A golden sun which shines so bright, a princess and enchanted knight. A meadow green with towering hills, waterfalls and big windmills. The air is clear as is the sky, firey dragons for a midnight fly. A world of magic in a wizard's hand, armies obey a king's command. A large stone castle over-looking the land, surrounded by moats and deadly quicksand. A queen in a robe of silk and gold, Sir Lancelot, so daring and bold. Thoughts of cavalry and mighty sword fights, a kingdom of joy and the struggle for right. A century where people were loyal and free, and all these dreams are my fantasy. ------------------ The Magical Rainbow Bunny |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
"Don't let it be forgot, that once there was a spot, for one brief shining moment that was known as Camelot". Welcome, Magical Rainbow Bunny! I am glad you posted this poem, because it was beautiful. The imagery is well done. Let's see some more! |
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Ron
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-05-19
Posts 8669Michigan, US |
Beautifully done! But Camelot isn't a fantasy. It lives in the hearts of every woman who has loved, every man who has been wronged, and every child who believes still in magic. And come to think of it, doesn't that describe us all? |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wonderful! Enjoyed every line! Welcome to the family. |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
i love those fantasies as well, perhaps one of the reasons i am studying history ------------------ one night at the airport...Childhood Memories...eight short weeks...Music to my Ears...your countenance...just watching tv...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J....Feel the need?...serving wench...a little girl...the mistress...stolen hours...Perfection...devotion...Master ...apart...plain...chat? |
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