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Open Poetry #1

a little girl

elvira
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since 1999-07-06

Posts 936
California

0 posted 1999-07-26 11:44 AM

[This message has been edited by elvira (edited 08-22-99).]

Genea
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since 1999-06-15

Posts 321
USA

1 posted 1999-07-26 12:04 PM

poignant!! [as i wipe a tear away]

Delores Hall
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since 1999-07-16

Posts 342
USA

2 posted 1999-07-26 12:42 PM

I know that feeling.I lost my mother when I
was young.Not in the same way though.

Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

3 posted 1999-07-26 08:18 PM

I can only tell you that I came this way and left with sorrow. A hug for the little girl.

Cinderella
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since 1999-06-23

Posts 152
Arizona

4 posted 1999-07-26 11:39 PM

My heart felt heavy as the little girl's heart broke. Very touching.

elvira
Senior Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 936
California

5 posted 1999-07-27 12:24 PM

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blueloon
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 161
NY

6 posted 1999-07-27 01:01 AM

A great big hug to the little girl...and a round of applause to elvira!
blueloon

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

7 posted 1999-07-27 01:09 AM

So very sad...I feel for that little girl. Excellent piece, Elvira!

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Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

8 posted 1999-07-27 01:23 AM

I can't find the words, really. You should just know that I very well may keep this, if you don't mind.

elvira
Senior Member

since 1999-07-06

Posts 936
California

9 posted 1999-07-27 02:19 AM

[This message has been edited by elvira (edited 08-22-99).]

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