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poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25

Posts 2646
Arkansas

0 posted 1999-07-26 12:42 PM

In my dreams - my heart's a castle
many rooms, but no one's there...
One small tide could wash away
All my secrets hidden there.

If you would only come inside
To dwell within my soul...
My empty rooms would be no more
Please love me - make me whole.

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

Elizabeth

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Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

1 posted 1999-07-26 06:39 PM

It's short, but it sure says a lot!

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

2 posted 1999-07-26 09:23 PM

Very sweet, poetFemmeFatale. One thing I've learnt is to create a room for yourself - we're never alone when we care for ourselves. Here's my favourite quote: 'To love oneself is the beginning of a lifelong romance' Oscar Wilde.

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

3 posted 1999-08-20 12:23 PM

Yes, this indeed says a lot...so very beautiful. I'm glad I dug it up!!

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*Krista Knutson*

"If I could be an angel, I'd make your every wish come true. But I am only human, just a woman lovin' you..." Trisha Yearwood

moonmoon
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since 1999-08-13

Posts 277
TX , USA

4 posted 1999-08-20 01:53 AM

Yes, a beautiful work that speaks volumes..!!

Severn, I agree, loving thyself is the first step to loving others..it took me a long while to figure that one out...

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"No one was ever ruined from without;
The final ruin comes from within.".....Amelia E. Barr

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

5 posted 1999-08-20 09:10 AM

Not a single wasted word...nicely done

blueloon
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 161
NY

6 posted 1999-08-20 10:26 AM

Poet- I am thankful for who ever brought this up to the top, like much of our work this was excellent.
blueloon

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To give yourself keeps yourself still,
And you must live, drawn by your own sweet skill.
-shakespeare
And so of you, beauteous and lovely youth,
When that shall vade, by verse distills your truth.
-shakespeare

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 1999-08-20 10:29 AM

What longing... I like!!!

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