The Dream (anyone recognise this?)

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Open Poetry #1

The Dream (anyone recognise this?)

Colin
Senior Member

since 1999-06-05

Posts 596
Callington, Cornwall, England

0 posted 1999-07-25 05:31 PM

I blink in dawn's fresh golden light
Beholding such a wondrous sight
A vision that is fresh and fair
Your silken sunlit firey hair
A spreading fan across my chest
Where your dear head laid down to rest
I stroke it gently from your face
And gasp in awe at your sweet grace
I watch your mouth, the soft moist lips
Caress your cheek with fingertips
Touching your alabaster skin
I know more beauty lies within.
I blink in dawn's fresh golden light
And hope this dream returns tonight.

(seeing as someone else has "blown her cover" I thought I'd join in too)

poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite

since 1999-07-25

Posts 2646
Arkansas

1 posted 1999-07-25 05:48 PM

Dearest Eric...most of my poetry was written a few years ago when I spent much of my time crying & longing for love...my younger years of heartache with the men I chose. Occasionally I still slip and allow a young man to "cause me a few sleepless nights," however I appreciate your thoughts on my morbid poetry!! LOL I'm a big fan of yours!!

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

2 posted 1999-07-25 05:55 PM

um....... Yep - I recognize it for sure - written just before a very special meeting, wasn't it???

[This message has been edited by Nan (edited 07-25-99).]

Elizabeth

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Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

3 posted 1999-07-25 08:14 PM

This is great-I knew I'd heard it somewhere...but what IS your name? LOL!

IsabelleSkye
Member

since 1999-06-27

Posts 253

4 posted 1999-07-25 10:06 PM

absolutely beautiful.
today at the coast reminded me...
Izzy

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"I would rather sit on a pumpkin, and have it all to myself,
than to be crowded on a velvet cushion."
.....Henry David Thoreau

Colin
Senior Member

since 1999-06-05

Posts 596
Callington, Cornwall, England

5 posted 1999-07-26 07:06 PM

Thanks for the replies everyone *8) I'm glad you all like it, because this poem is very special to me.

A little hint for Elizabeth... look at the post above yours!

Thanks again, Eric

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