Open Poetry #1 |
A Wedding Vow |
Nectar Junior Member
since 1999-06-09
Posts 18Pensacola, Florida |
Captivating my whole You stepped through a door Never opened Never found Walking lightly into my heart You bore burdens That have no consequence With me Here you are Ever burning, ever-glowing Filling the emptiness That once threatened to consume me I can’t help but want you I can’t help but need you So I throw practicality away And fall senselessly in love Three small words So simple So deep At the root of who I am At the root of who you are At the root of who we will be As I love you eternally |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Nice to see you here, Nectar... |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Gave me goosebumps there at the end! Great poem! Welcome aboard! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
TGTBH (Too Good To Be Hidden - at the bottom..up you go!) |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
This really is TGTBHATB! Very emotional. |
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