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Open Poetry #1

Lost within oceans of thought

peeperd
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since 1999-06-21

Posts 3
Stillwater, OK, USA

0 posted 1999-06-21 09:39 PM

Crossroads

I sit upon the moonlit shore
And talk to the lapping wave
From the chaos I dig
For answers I can save

The soft wind whispers
Wiping tears from my face
As the darkness falls
To hide me from this place

Now I stand
Looking from another state
Upon myself
Deciding my fate

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

1 posted 1999-07-26 12:09 PM

I understand the feeling. Another great poem, buried too soon in my opinion. Excellent!

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*Krista Knutson*

"It's a crazy thing, fate has perfect wings..."-Deanna Carter

poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25

Posts 2646
Arkansas

2 posted 1999-07-26 12:19 PM

I love poems about the seashore and the ocean waves...I love the ocean and you do a great job making me feel like I'm there again. It's the best place to loose yourself in your thoughts....

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25

Posts 2646
Arkansas

3 posted 1999-07-26 07:03 PM

Even though it's short, I like it, so I wanted to move it back up...I like the topic title even...

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

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