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A childlike flower...

poetFemmeFatale
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since 1999-07-25

Posts 2646
Arkansas

0 posted 1999-07-25 04:23 PM

Hold me close - Caress my soul -
Wipe away my tears...
Whisper to me - words of strength -
Chase away my fears...
Within your arms - I'm like a child -
Don't ever let me go...
Within your arms - I'm so secure -
A flower yearning to grow.
You are the sun - that warms my heart -
That makes my dreams come true...
You are the star - I wish upon -
I give my life to you..........

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

Crystal
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since 1999-07-24

Posts 62
Hazel Park Mi U.S.A.

1 posted 1999-08-02 09:03 PM

BEAUTIFUL poem. I can't believe no one replied!

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-08-02 09:15 PM

Absolutely beautiful

Sally S.
Senior Member

since 1999-06-07

Posts 847
Ohio

3 posted 1999-08-02 09:16 PM

This is absolutely lovely!! You're right,Crystal..I missed it as well.

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

4 posted 1999-08-02 09:36 PM

Wow, beautiful!! This surely fits my mood today...keep up the excellent work, poetFemmeFatale!! I love to read it!

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*Krista Knutson*

"I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks

poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite

since 1999-07-25

Posts 2646
Arkansas

5 posted 1999-08-13 10:42 AM

I guess the women in here like this type of poem more than the men....? For the men, you'll like my stuff in the Adult Forum!! he he he

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- poet FemmeFatale

"The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

6 posted 1999-08-13 10:49 AM

Believe me Femme, the men here appreciate this type of poem also, well atleast this one does.

Michael

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 1999-08-13 10:58 AM

I like!!! (Another "thumbs up" from a female! *G*)

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