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Where Lover's Never Weep
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Where Lover's Never Weep |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas 
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A night or so ago - The winds began to blow - And with these winds came thunder,lightning,rain. Outside, the sky turned black - Tears were falling,"Hold them back..." That voice from far away called me by name. My spirit rose to sail - To that land of fairy-tale - And suddenly, up rode a shining knight. That stranger took my hand - Whispered words of love so grand - And took me to his castle for the night. I was his princess fair - Not a question did I dare - Along the shores of love we rode till dawn. His tides soon washed away - All my tears of yesterday - But alas, when I awoke, my knight was gone. This land of fairy-tale Is but a dream to keep - This place known as "Where Lover's Never Weep." |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
excellent form!...Welcome to the forum pFF  |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Jeeze Man ! How long does a girl have to look for a shining knight ? You should be able to pick one up at the supermarket or something !? Through the Drive-Through! LOL I'll have ONE to go, oh....uh....could you SUPER SIZE "that" ???!!!  ha ha ha he he he ho ho !!! get it ?------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
I get it, PFF! Great poem, excellently written. ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Beautiful piece. Your sentiment shines. Michael |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Knight though I am, with Darkness I shine. Rescuing you fair damsel would be my pleasure. ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Great piece! |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Looks like this must have been your first poem - marvellous, and so wistful. Keep dreaming, friend. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love this! I knew I'd like it, just by the title |
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