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heides
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since 1999-07-24
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0 posted 1999-07-24 05:51 PM





Scattered pieces
of heart...

they lie
too far apart.

And words
never tell

of some cold
inner hell...

too broken to try.

All memory
of pain

flows away
with the rain

of time,
tear by tear.

So the end
should be near...

so young, though, to die.




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Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
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Somewhere near the Rainbow
1 posted 1999-07-24 05:53 PM


Very sad. I liked the style.
Crystal
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since 1999-07-24
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Hazel Park Mi U.S.A.
2 posted 1999-07-24 07:44 PM


Wow. This was really deep. Gives you something to think about.
Marge Tindal
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Florida's Foreverly Shores
3 posted 2001-09-23 06:44 AM


Heides~
Very enjoyable~
Hope you're out there and come back to grace the forums again~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                                   noles1@totcon.com            

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