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Open Poetry #1

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heides
New Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 6

0 posted 1999-07-24 05:51 PM

Scattered pieces
of heart...

they lie
too far apart.

And words
never tell

of some cold
inner hell...

too broken to try.

All memory
of pain

flows away
with the rain

of time,
tear by tear.

So the end
should be near...

so young, though, to die.

Lost Dreamer
Member Elite

since 1999-06-20

Posts 2464
Somewhere near the Rainbow

1 posted 1999-07-24 05:53 PM

Very sad. I liked the style.

Crystal
Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 62
Hazel Park Mi U.S.A.

2 posted 1999-07-24 07:44 PM

Wow. This was really deep. Gives you something to think about.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-09-23 06:44 AM

Heides~
Very enjoyable~
Hope you're out there and come back to grace the forums again~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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