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Dear Sister Moon
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Dear Sister Moon |
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lenny Member
since 1999-07-11
Posts 63front royal, va. u.s.a. |
Platinum beams cascade from celestial heights Illumining the hills, routing the night Silver scented love fills my soul Glimmering joy sings, permeating all. November cold, alive, tumbles down the windowpane Playing tag with warm furnace currents And rejoicing in Sister Moons fullness Dances on my cheeks, gladdening my spirit. Gracefully silent She arcs the sky Wondrously still in Her movement Watching, touching, blessing, Knowing... Calling forth the tide of my heart In swells of oceanic joy To Her bosom of immortality She draws me near. Sea of Tranquility Shimmering above, shimmering within Ignite my spirit with cosmic ardor And inundate the shores of my being. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
This is beatiful. Really. Nice job.  dp |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Imagery and phrasing second to none. Very nice indeed. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Excellent! Loved the line"Playing tag with warm furnace currents" |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lenny~ This is just very, very lovely~ I hope your e-mail is still valid ... and you come back to join our circle~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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