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Passions Dream |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Passions Dream Tender lips of cherry wine gently pressed against mine. Creating my key-locked vowed to another heart a piercing of love's dart. Sending my fragile emotions into a human quake, as I approach the vivid moment where I suddenly become awake. The passions dream smoldering in my mind relentlessly reminding me, a dreamers love is simply difficult to find. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Difficult to find, maybe, but it's there, as I'm sure you know. Nice work, dreamer. |
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heides New Member
since 1999-07-24
Posts 6 |
maybe that's why I can't ever remember my dreams... Your poem. It's sad, but true, but that combination pleases me, you know. Not that sadness pleases me, what I mean is reading it does. I'll be looking for more like this one. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I loved this one. Beautiful. |
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Crystal Member
since 1999-07-24
Posts 62Hazel Park Mi U.S.A. |
I enjoy reading your poems. This one is truly beautiful. |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
This makes me feel a bit melancholy. Perhaps that is why I like it. |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Reminds me of a past relationship. Nice work. ------------------ The day is at it's end, but for you it's only just begining. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
I am speechless, never have I had so many responses to a poem. It sends the emotions soaring to great heights. I thank each and everyone of you for first of all reading what I write, and second for taking the time to give your comments.This is a wonderful home away from home. Thanks again all of you! |
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