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Crystal
Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 62
Hazel Park Mi U.S.A.

0 posted 1999-07-24 06:46 PM

He's a boozer, loser, and a user,
He cheats, steals, and he's a drug abuser.

The betrayel and deceit,
Make me want to rip off his feet.

When he poops and pee's,
I want to shoot at his knees.

As he drinks every sip,
I want to break his hip.

With every taste,
I want to tear open his waist.

If he gave me stones,
I would break all his bones.

When he hangs out with all his peers,
I want to rip off his ears.

While he's with all his hoes,
I want to break his nose.

While he tells me all his lies,
I want to poke out his eyes.

With all his stares,
I want to rip out every hair.

With all his grief,
I want to pull out his teeth.

As he's being a prick,
I want to chop off his d**k.

The voices in my head,
tell me he's better off dead.

[This message has been edited by Crystal (edited 07-24-99).]

[This message has been edited by Crystal (edited 07-31-99).]

Crystal
Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 62
Hazel Park Mi U.S.A.

1 posted 1999-07-24 06:55 PM

**Notice***

This was just a joke for my boyfriend. I am really not this psycho!

heides
New Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 6

2 posted 1999-07-24 07:36 PM

Doing it would be psycho...thinking it is human. We cannot be held responsible for our thoughts, or we'd all be in jail, wouldn't we?

Chris h 007
New Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 6
Australia

3 posted 1999-07-24 08:03 PM

Honey, this is a good poem i like it
i love you very much and you know this mannnnnn.. lol.. i will reply more later. love chris

Crystal
Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 62
Hazel Park Mi U.S.A.

4 posted 1999-07-24 08:29 PM

Thank you Heides I feel better now. And also thank you Chris(hunny) for the reply.

Delores Hall
Member

since 1999-07-16

Posts 342
USA

5 posted 1999-07-24 10:01 PM

Crystal you are one sick puppy.But you know
what I actually laughed.And that's what writing is all about. If you can pull an emotion out someone then you've done good.Or if you can make someone think that's good. Keep writing.

Crystal
Member

since 1999-07-24

Posts 62
Hazel Park Mi U.S.A.

6 posted 1999-07-25 01:50 AM

Thank-you Delores for finding this humorous, that was the point. This was not meant to harm or offend anyone. I'm glad you got a good laugh.

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