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Open Poetry #1

Passion of the Immortal

Elysium Moon
New Member

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9

0 posted 1999-07-22 11:31 PM

Paradise found
in her hair unbound
as it floats down to her waist

Passion discovered
in her body uncovered
of love she now shall taste

Pleasures enter
through her wanton’s center
abandoned there in haste

Sleep discover
beneath sated cover
immortal no longer chaste

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

1 posted 1999-07-23 07:52 PM

Good, but tread lightly, this may be more suited to the Adult Forum.

Andrew Scott
Member Elite

since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

2 posted 1999-07-23 08:23 PM

I've read all three of the Immortal postings and found them very appealing. I'm looking forward to more. Welcome to this land of ours.

Craig
Member

since 1999-06-10

Posts 444

3 posted 1999-07-24 02:17 PM

This is really well done, I can only assume that people have missed this, or not had enough time or chance to reply to it, don’t get depressed if people don’t answer straight away, your good they just don’t know yet how good, so lets give them another chance.

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

4 posted 1999-07-24 04:46 PM

Indeed a delight, however as stated before you might find the adult forum more suited to this level of poetic passion.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

5 posted 2002-05-23 02:30 PM

Rockin'!

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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