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Open Poetry #1

Hunger of the Immortal

Elysium Moon
New Member

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9

0 posted 1999-07-22 10:43 PM

Sitting astride her Stygian mount
wings curled at her side
riding faster through the glen
seeking vengeance for her pride
fiery blood flowing in her veins
the need is on her now
seeking mortal blood
to fulfill her virgin vow
thrusting forward in the seat
crazed with hunger’s desire
no man is safe from vixen’s touch
that ignites her wanton fire

Jessica Pahre
Junior Member

since 1999-07-22

Posts 12
Fort Polk, LA, USA

1 posted 1999-07-22 11:21 PM

Very nice. A good use of imagery, one of the few that has brought a full-fledged picture into my mind of what's being said.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 1999-07-23 07:56 PM

I sense a trilogy? Is there more to the story?

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

3 posted 2002-05-23 02:30 PM

We know th' answer t' that.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

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