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Revenge of the Immortal |
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Elysium Moon New Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9 |
Silvery wings spreading wide she took her lover deep inside held him in her womanly vise till he surrendered to her ice Nymph of lambent ice so pure took a victim as her cure no mortal will she allow to be succor of her immortality cast aside he lay replete spells were given, now complete doomed to roam for eternity remembering her femininity |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
romantic and dark...great combination...and... Welcome Elysium Moon  ------------------ If I had my mouth I would bite. If I had my liberty I would do my liking. In the mean time, let me be that I am, and seek not to alter me. ~~~Shakespeare~~~ |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
wow, ver very good. ------------------ "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the forum. This is dark and mildly erotic, I liked it. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Hey, look what I found.  She said burn ... together. |
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