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Listen Not |
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satintears New Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 2 |
Listen…do you hear the sound? It is there in the sadness of silence Shadows fall in exquisite form Lovers embrace no longer Listen closely…hear with your mind Your ears have lost sensitivity to the noise Do not speak Tell me not that you understand Concentrate Not on my words But on the emotion around you It will cannibalize you eternally If you give merit to what you cannot hear That is true my love Why some turn a deaf ear Listen…do you grasp what has happened? Pitches not in tune with the surroundings Try with all your might to hear the call Take inside of you what you have heard Deep inside where voices do not reach Allow yourself to go there Hear the noise Shattering, piercing My heart is breaking Into pieces Bit by bit Over you But you cannot hear You have not learned to listen With your heart. ------------------ Close your eyes and listen carefully with your mind... |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
This is truly wonderful.......very moving. I shall be looking for more from you. ------------------ "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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Princess Lily Member
since 1999-07-13
Posts 149USA |
This is a very moving piece.Nice work. ------------------ We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe |
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