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Broken Heart |
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tacojen Junior Member
since 1999-07-21
Posts 23 |
I amble slowly along the beach. I button my coat to shield my aching heart from the cold wind. I look over the choppy waves, I wonder if I can walk on the shimmering path that the moon makes on the water. I sit down on a lonely rock. I draw broken heart's in the cold sand. I brush my tears away... I wonder why love has to hurt so much.... ------------------ Angel Hugs |
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Princess Lily Member
since 1999-07-13
Posts 149USA |
Love is very peculiar-this is well written ------------------ We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe [This message has been edited by Princess Lily (edited 07-22-99).] |
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swan Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 58california, usa |
this is very nice Swan |
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