Open Poetry #1 |
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Becoming Indiana |
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mia Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 118 |
A new adventure awaits, and so I leave while you sleep. I am Indiana now and tonight, I want to explore the vast territory of your body. I will swim in the deep of your eyes holding breath as long as I can to find all the lost treasures I will rest in the oasis of your mouth taking comfort in the safety of your lips I will descend the steep fall of your neck from here there is no horizon, simply passions to no ends I will sail the waves of your chest slowly rocked by the sweet lullaby of your breath I will lose myself in your jungle and then climb your peak, from here I see extasy Slide... then I will return home to your arms because no adventure is greater that our love mia |
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Poetwheel Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 208Canada |
Very nice Mia, very beautiful imagery. Nice job. PW ------------------ Poetic Wheelbarrow http://www.stormloader.com/poetwheel/den.html ICQ: 44370408 |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This poem paints a beautiful picture of giving oneself to another completely. I enjoyed the visuals of this one. |
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Delores Hall Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 342USA |
Oh to be in love is a wonderful thing.Nice going Mia. |
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