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Open Poetry #1

gone,but never forgotten

r. baker33
Member

since 1999-07-03

Posts 55
glen easton wv

0 posted 1999-07-21 03:44 AM

I did'nt see the knife comming from out of
your pocket. did you feel it as it cut
through the flesh in my back?did you even
take the time to see the look in my eyes as
you slowly twisted the blade.I can tell you
that look of hurt,and pain. the feeling of
betrayal.when you turned to walk away did
you feel it? the better question is will
you ever feel it? you may be gone,but I will
remember still.the reality is that in our
world there are two types of people.
those that care,and those that need cared
for.which one do you fall under?
that is something I may never know.
your gone,but you'll never be forgotten.

Dragon
Member

since 1999-07-14

Posts 138
Highmount,NY ,USA

1 posted 1999-07-21 03:50 AM

Beautiful free verse! Well done !

r. baker33
Member

since 1999-07-03

Posts 55
glen easton wv

2 posted 1999-07-21 03:56 AM

I just wanted to say thanks.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 1999-07-21 10:33 AM

Wow!! Very intense. It's one of those poems that you just want to say...why? I couldn't read it without answering the questions or asking the questions myself. Funny how we can find some that we really relate to, this is one. Thanks!

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Delores Hall
Member

since 1999-07-16

Posts 342
USA

4 posted 1999-07-21 11:20 AM

This is different.Kind of dark.

r. baker33
Member

since 1999-07-03

Posts 55
glen easton wv

5 posted 1999-07-22 01:16 AM

I just wanted again to say thanks for the
replies. just one note.this poem is meant
to convey lessons learned from a real life
experience.

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