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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Tranquility "(C)" Lost Dreamer 04/98 When I gaze into the sea it tranquilizes me. The distance I can see seems like eternity. My mind floats to a place free of life's busy pace. I sit down now water touching my toes. I ponder how much I really know. For while I'm here feeling tranquilized, someone, somewhere is being brutalized. I wish the world could join hands, and gather round the sea Then all could feel tranquility through life's eternity. |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
You touched me, I wish so too. |
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Rita Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 55Danville Va. 24540 |
simple in form, yet complex in definition......head bowed in admiration |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Reality is the byproduct of dreams. I'm with you on this one. Well done. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
My heart-felt thanks reach out to all of you. Your compliments are much appreciated. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
tranquil yes the word for this poem i love it i needed calmin |
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