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Open Poetry #1

Unafordable Treasures

Ohme
Senior Member

since 1999-07-17

Posts 816
Texas

0 posted 1999-07-20 07:58 PM

You asked for wealth
I gave you sun.
Its glory to behold.
But with a frown
you turned it down
and never saw it's gold.

You asked for beauty
so I plucked
a blossom from a tree
Then with a sigh
you passed it by
for you saw only me.

You asked of me
so many things,
demands I could not meet.
Though I would try
my love did lie
one step beneath you feet.

Andrew Scott
Member Elite

since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

1 posted 1999-07-20 08:09 PM

Another fine offering. You have a great talent. That must have been one hard hearted person not to know the treasure to be found under foot.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

2 posted 1999-07-20 08:23 PM

Wow....I really loved this piece of work. The format was great, rhyme and rythym very well done and it flows with the grace of a gentle stream!! Thank you for sharing, looking forward to more of the same.

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"Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald

Dragon
Member

since 1999-07-14

Posts 138
Highmount,NY ,USA

3 posted 1999-07-20 08:37 PM

There are none so blind as those how will not see.great writing!

~one voice~
Senior Member

since 1999-07-08

Posts 664
Billings, MT USA

4 posted 1999-07-20 08:42 PM

Once again, a wonderful piece! All I can say is: Ohme, oh my!

hehehehehehe

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~onevoice~

"I never kissed somebody so that they would break my heart."

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