Unbound (repost, only blank verse I have)

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DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

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0 posted 1999-07-20 02:55 AM

Two lone figures stand, embracing, watching the Sea.

The heat of their bodies dispelling the chill.

Between them an eagerness stands, filled with fear.

Turning to him, probing his eyes, she finds love.

Revealed by her own eyes, he sees a yearning.

Together, as one, the decision is made.

As their lips touch, their love springs to it's full bloom.

On a rock, rising above the Sea they lie.

They consummate their love here, for all to see.

The fire met, he lays his head upon her breast.

With his hand upon her silken thighs, she cries.

As tender as a dove, he wipes her tears aside.

In answer to his touch, she faces the Sea.

As one they stand, both feeling their fulfillment.

Two lone figures stand, embracing, watching the Sea.

The night beckons, calling them to it's embrace.

Stepping from the rock, their lips touch, their last kiss.

As they kiss, the Sea takes them in it's embrace.

©1999 DreamEvil

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Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings?
DreamEvil©

Alwye

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since 1999-06-16

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In the space between moments

1 posted 1999-07-20 02:57 AM

As you already know, I really like this. A good open verse. In my humble opinion anyway. Keep up the great work!

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..And down from the eternal heavens comes fate's jewelled fingertips, it's magic flowing into awaiting souls..--Krista Knutson

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~one voice~
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since 1999-07-08

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2 posted 1999-07-20 03:00 AM

Dream, I could read this a thousand times over. I wish I could be there.

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~onevoice~

"I never kissed somebody so that they would break my heart."

elvira
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since 1999-07-06

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3 posted 1999-07-20 03:10 AM

check your e-mail, luv

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Dragon
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since 1999-07-14

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Highmount,NY ,USA

4 posted 1999-07-20 03:36 AM

Very well written.Time for you to write more!

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

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5 posted 1999-07-20 05:18 AM

Thank you, I'm posting this to Critical Analysis, as well.

Starfish
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since 1999-07-20

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New Zealand

6 posted 1999-07-20 05:40 AM

I dream of beaches and your poem transposed that image of love, into figures; or maybe it is just my over active imagination. Thanks for your insiration.

Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20

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Somewhere near the Rainbow

7 posted 1999-07-20 07:19 AM

Wow, spell binding, passionate, intense, and most of all beautiful. Thanks for sharing, I am in awe with this one.

Saxoness

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since 1999-07-18

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Texas

8 posted 1999-07-20 09:25 AM

I really like this one, dreamevil

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot

DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

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9 posted 1999-07-20 09:06 PM

THank you.

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