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Open Poetry #1

Autumn Colors

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

0 posted 1999-07-20 06:30 PM

A Haiku for "Treasure"

Autumn colors
Shimmering maple reds
A Treasure unspoken

Princess Lily
Member

since 1999-07-13

Posts 149
USA

1 posted 1999-07-21 03:53 PM

THIS IS A VERY SHORT BUT EXPLANITORY PIECE.
WONDERFUL!!

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We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe

Princess Lily
Member

since 1999-07-13

Posts 149
USA

2 posted 1999-07-21 03:54 PM

THIS IS A VERY SHORT BUT EXPLANITORY PIECE.
WONDERFUL!!

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We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe

INclan
Senior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 1024
Indiana, USA

3 posted 1999-07-21 06:28 PM

Thank you Princes Lily, I was becoming afraid that all these poets didn't know what a Haiku was.

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

4 posted 2000-07-13 11:20 PM

well, INclan,i do know what a haiku is but even if i don't, i believe i will still like this little gem anyway

wow, i believe this is the first free-form haiku i have ever seen at Passions...thanx for introducing me to a whole new world

Tenderheart
Junior Member

since 2000-03-20

Posts 17

5 posted 2000-07-23 05:12 PM

INclan....you've become a master at this....it is beautiful.....more, please.

Blush
Member

since 2002-08-31

Posts 56
Ky

6 posted 2002-10-21 08:53 AM

I just love Autumn and loved this Ku
You captured the moment most splendidly
Blush

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