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Open Poetry #1

This is not a rap

Starfish
Junior Member

since 1999-07-20

Posts 34
New Zealand

0 posted 1999-07-20 07:17 AM

Chris gives the title
to the B movie,
played over in my head

He explains the reason
why the sphinx is small-headed
why the world is really flat
and why bad poems are crap

Chris gives a pint of blood
to children in A & E
to poems in need of plasma
and to trippers on holiday

He describes
the digestive system of rats,
graphic italian scenes
& pulp reality.

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

1 posted 1999-07-28 08:19 PM

This is a very interesting piece. Your style is wonderful... this leaves me sort of spellbound. I'm bringing this up front for you for more comments. Plus, I'm going to search for more of your works.

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