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lenny Member
since 1999-07-11
Posts 63front royal, va. u.s.a. |
As Siamese twins--insep'rable Do time and space take stage As diff'rent spaces co-exist So time--both on and off of stage. Minds spotlight limits what we see And yet the rest is there The darkness only hides it 'till It turn is then and there. Or here and now, it's all the same Save that the lights now on Directing consciousness to points That in the dark seem gone. ------------------ lenny |
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Christina Myers Member
since 1999-06-21
Posts 159 |
This one is nice, but it doesn't seem finished Was there more that you cut? Thank you for sharing it with us,though. Christina ------------------ And I thought: this is how poetry is born. It comes from invisible heights, it is secret and dark in its origins, solitary and fragrant, and like the river it will assimilate whatever falls in its current; it will seek a route between the mountains, and its crystalline song will ripple through the meadows."- Pablo Neruda |
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lenny Member
since 1999-07-11
Posts 63front royal, va. u.s.a. |
No more. No less. The point was encapsulated in the lines that were delivered. Thank you for your response though. Smile... ------------------ lenny |
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pandora Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 184 |
Time and space as siamese twins.... wonderful metaphor. I found this over on page 16 and thought it worthy of moving up front for more comments. Very fine writing, mr. lenny! ------------------ With one wish we wake the will within wisdom. With one will we wish the wisdom within waking. --pandora |
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