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Letter to My Ladies II
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Letter to My Ladies II |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
My old soul is echoed by Moonlight, The first poet friend I had. Her beauty tends to come out at night, For which I am truly glad. In answer to the darling Sunshine, Who was eager to reply. It was not my place to call you mine, Now that I know you, may I? Sweet Alwye, try to forgive me please, I didn't mean to offend. I enjoy your warmth and how you tease, Let our friendship never end. Elvira, you cast a subtle spell, As a ghostly presence here. We're cast from the same mold. You can tell, By the way we carry fear. The next I meet only in e-mail, Felecia, my dearest friend. My dear, I really wish I could tell, Where this friendship would end. You know, I had a Red Letter day, a free spirit I just met. I'm really glad she's come my way, I'm sure we'll both benefit. Though I have intended no deceit, It seems you might think I did. This false deception is now complete, My dalliances were never hid. ©1999 DreamEvil ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© [This message has been edited by DreamEvil (edited 07-19-99).] |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
very nice, I like how you paint each "lady" as a unique soul. Well done, for each of us is a wild beauty, as you have let all know. ------------------ "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
He who opens his arms to the world, must expect to have a few ladys in his grasp. Nevertheless he can not be all Evil. Perhaps that is why he is known as Dream. Dream on ! |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Very good letter, Dream! I agree with saxoness...I like you gave each oen a personality! ------------------ ~onevoice~ "I never kissed somebody so that they would break my heart." |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
DreamEvil, you're quite a charmer  ------------------ Childhood Memories...eight short weeks...your countenance...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J... serving wench...the mistress...stolen hours...devotion...Master...apart... |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
I agree with elvira, you are quite the charmer...and a great poet too. Keep it up, Dream! ------------------ ..And down from the eternal heavens comes fate's jewelled fingertips, it's magic flowing into awaiting souls..--Krista Knutson *Krista Knutson* |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
I'm glad that I'm appreciated. Thank you. ------------------ Shall I indulge in flights of fancy hampered by clipped wings? DreamEvil© |
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Dragon Member
since 1999-07-14
Posts 138Highmount,NY ,USA |
I wish I had to following you do my friend.I love it!! |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah DreamEvil, a spell you weave and not your practice to deceive I'll be yours, so it seems as we visit each other's dreams. Great expectations! Thanks for including me among your lovelier ladies. ------------------ Sunshine Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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thursdayschild Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 169Houston, Tx. |
How truly touching to see my name here among your sweet words. Thank you Dear Sir!  |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Just giving the Ladies their due. |
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