Open Poetry #1 |
I Love You- for that special Lady |
DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
I'm trying to think of a way to say it, That wont sound overdone. Trying make the light of my life Know she's the only one. I know that it sounds jaded, seriously, Truly I really do. But there are so many things left to say, When I say I love you. She makes me think of delightful things, More than just of her. Like stealing kisses and angel's wings, Truly she's my treasure. I could not write a single romantic verse, Without some inspiration. I suffer from a tragic writer's curse, Insipid desperation. That inspiration is you, my love, my light, That brings forth such lovely words. Thinking of you is daily a cause for delight, For the way our desires merge. I watch you leave me, every single day, My heart crushed in despair. Yet knowing your coming helps me stay, Sane and resist despair. ©1999 DreamEvil ------------------ Being paranoid is the biggest reason I'm still around to practice my paranoia. DreamEvil© |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
I'm telling you right now, Dream, that special lady is really special to be loved by You!!! Beautiful... but then I already told you that! ------------------ ~onevoice~ "I never kissed somebody so that they would break my heart." |
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Gentle Soul Member
since 1999-07-12
Posts 273Vinton,Ohio USA |
I love it.. I think its sweet, and Romantic ------------------ Gënt£ë¤§°û£ |
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Dragon Member
since 1999-07-14
Posts 138Highmount,NY ,USA |
I know how pleased your lady is,Bravo! |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Thank you again, dear friends. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I really, really like your new postings. ------------------ Sunshine Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Moonlight Member
since 1999-06-25
Posts 105Auburn, Alabama USA |
sometimes there just isn't enough words to tell someone what you feel... |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
"I Love You." The three most powerful words known to humankind. You do them honor. That's one lucky lady. |
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Rita Member
since 1999-07-19
Posts 55Danville Va. 24540 |
I really like the ring to it......very very fortunate lady. |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Very nice. Very fortunate lady. Ohme |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
I hope she thinks so. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely! So, what does your lady love think of that poem about the ladies on the forum? Did she read it yet! Give me her e-mail address and I'll send it to her! (Is this a new, romantic DreamEvil?) |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
SHHH!! Don't tell anyone! It's a secret. LOLOL |
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thursdayschild Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 169Houston, Tx. |
What a completely wonderful poem! Truly love this one. "angel's wings", reminds me of something... |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
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