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Falling in Love |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert 
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Lips trembling afraid to say Thoughts I feel on this day Will I scare you away? (I think I’m falling in Love) Voices tumbling in my head Feelings of anxious dread I can’t believe I just said I think I’m falling in Love… Joy greater than I’ve known Feelings not all my own Seeds reaped from what I’ve sown You KNOW you’re falling in Love ? Laughter sweeter than a kiss I can’t believed I was afraid of this What we’ve just shared is such bliss Alas…We are in Love! ------------------ For sometimes when the Darkness falls, we must surrender, take what is ours, and give what we can, and always remember love is somewhere waiting... |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Awesome poem azblond! I love that adrenaline in the very beginning, don't you? ------------------ ~one voice~ *You are you, and I am I, and if by chance we find each other, it's beautiful.* |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
love the way it unfolds with it why i have fallen in love  |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
I wrote this one on behalf of a friend of mine who soooo agonized over telling her boyfriend how she felt, just to find he had been agonizing over the same things...love can be silly, can't it??!! ------------------ For sometimes when the Darkness falls, we must surrender, take what is ours, and give what we can, and always remember love is somewhere waiting... |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
love...it's worth all the anxieties we put ourselves through...*sigh* ------------------ Childhood Memories...your countenance...hoarse whispers...My One and Only...Tribute to M.J... serving wench...stolen hours...devotion...Master...apart... |
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blueloon Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 161NY |
Life's greatest high and most profound topic. Great job on expressing it. blueloon |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
Thank you elvira and blueloon...almost makes me want to fall in love again..(hopefully with my husband, or he might just get a tad bit miffed...oh well...who says you can't fall in love with the same person more than once...Hmmm...sounds like a new poem coming along!) ------------------ For sometimes when the Darkness falls, we must surrender, take what is ours, and give what we can, and always remember love is somewhere waiting... |
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Kate New Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 4Florida |
I love the honesty. I can almost feel the emotions. |
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