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Princess Lily Member
since 1999-07-13
Posts 149USA |
I didn't see the world today I'm trapped in a lonely place All my anger and hurt inside Makes me long for suicide You fall in and out of love You drink and try some drugs Nothing seems important anymore You're nothing, but a whore You'll never amount to anything You may as well stop wanting I saw the world today I'm released from the lonely place All my anger and hurt are outside And I no longer dream of suicide I fell in, but not out of love I didn't drink or do any drugs Everything's more important than before Cause now I'm me and not a whore I will amount to something So, maybe I'll stop wanting But I'll NEVER give up hope! --------------------------------------------- I began writing this at a very sad point in my life and finished it as I began to feel better about myself. ------------------ We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Congratulations on your turn around. You've only got forward to go to from here. ------------------ Sunshine Words will always express our feelings true. KRJ |
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Princess Lily Member
since 1999-07-13
Posts 149USA |
Thank you very much.This poem makes me feel good everytime I read it.Just because I know that I am better now!Thanx again!  --------------------------------------------- We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe [This message has been edited by Princess Lily (edited 07-26-99).] |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Yes, congrats my friend. An excellent piece. I am so glad things are going in your favor now. I am here whenever you need me.  ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks |
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Princess Lily Member
since 1999-07-13
Posts 149USA |
Thanx!Alwye.I am very appreciative on your reply and also of always being here or well there for me-hehehe!~Lily ------------------ We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe *A rose is a rose it withers and dies...so long as you keep it the memories stay alive* |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Life goes on and so must we all. I have been through things I would not wish on anyone including my worst enemy, but do I regret it. No, I wouldn't want to live through it again, but regret it, no, for it has made me who I am and I really like that person. You should like who you have become from lifes trials. ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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Princess Lily Member
since 1999-07-13
Posts 149USA |
Hoot, Thanx for the reply and you're right we shoul all love ourselves for who we are.I do ~Lily------------------ We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe *A rose is a rose it withers and dies...so long as you keep it the memories stay alive* |
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