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Princess Lily Member
since 1999-07-13
Posts 149USA |
I went to bed early I wanted to dream I fell asleep early I started to dream My dreams were so real You were in them I wanted them to be real I wanted to live them I dreamt of flowers so beautiful You were there, too The sky was also beautiful I'm glad you saw it, too I love to dream That's when I see you Do you like to dream? I can't wait to see you ------------------ We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe |
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Alain DeLaCendres Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 119Ohio |
I read the group of four poems you posted, and they were all good but I liked this one the best. The repition was interesting. ------------------ Tout s'en va, tout passe, l'eau coule, et le couer oublie. |
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Princess Lily Member
since 1999-07-13
Posts 149USA |
Thank you very much.This is my favorite, too  --------------------------------------------- We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe [This message has been edited by Princess Lily (edited 07-26-99).] |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Very beautiful, Meli! ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks |
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Princess Lily Member
since 1999-07-13
Posts 149USA |
Thank you, my friend .This is the poem that made me a semi-finalist in a poetry contest ~Lily------------------ We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe *A rose is a rose it withers and dies...so long as you keep it the memories stay alive* |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I like the simplicity of this one, it rings so sincere and true. ------------------ "Nobody has measured, not even poets, how much the heart can hold" ~Zelda Fitzgerald |
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Princess Lily Member
since 1999-07-13
Posts 149USA |
Thank you very much!This was written for a very wonderful guy.He is my ex now, but we will always be in each others heart for sure ~Lily------------------ We see only what we want to see~unless perhaps~we believe *A rose is a rose it withers and dies...so long as you keep it the memories stay alive* |
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