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Cocoon |
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Mark R. Member
since 1999-06-25
Posts 113San Francisco, CA. |
Light and daring it wavers in the night, Hanging on for dear life with all it's might. Fierce and carnivorous fauna reach for it's core, Gripping at it's strands wishing for more. Deep within a life remains, Precious soul it so constrains. Beckoning to be free it feels, Breaking through its hardened seals. Falling thru space before my sight, Spreading it's wings and fleeing in flight. Flying thru the air and in the moonlight, Shedding its fears; future strong and bright. As I look to the skies, I focus my eyes. There in the light of the moon, Lays the cocoon. |
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elvira Senior Member
since 1999-07-06
Posts 936California |
i certainly got "wrapped up" in this poem  |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Wow, wonderfully done. I like this! ------------------ ..And down from the eternal heavens comes fate's jeweled fingertips, it's magic flowing into awaiting souls..--Krista Knutson *Krista Knutson* |
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Mark R. Member
since 1999-06-25
Posts 113San Francisco, CA. |
Thank you everyone for your continued support and words of encouragement. You make it only easier for a beginner like myself to pursue such endeavors. Thanks again... |
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Mark R. Member
since 1999-06-25
Posts 113San Francisco, CA. |
Okay so I lied. Last one I promise....(smilin') [This message has been edited by Mark R. (edited 08-17-99).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love this! the last verse is great! |
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