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Wondering Why? |
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Mark R. Member
since 1999-06-25
Posts 113San Francisco, CA. |
My heart wonders why you left, How you could say you loved me? Deep inside my soul yearns to be free, My eyes....to see. My body longs for your embrace, My lips....your taste. My heart beckons this love, I not waste, My mind convinces, that I leave in haste. "What did I do to deserve this!?" I felt our hearts meld with our first kiss. "Did it not send you into eternal bliss?" I realize, that it was fate, And that for me; it is now too late. I am not filled with love; rather hate, And all I can do now is just wait.... ....For me to break this invisible seal, And to be confident that in time my heart to.... Will heal.... |
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Sue Member
since 1999-08-04
Posts 383France |
Hard decisions can make very good poems. |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
"My lips - your taste"....I really loved this line, dear Mark....Beautiful & sensual , yet so sad....wonderful piece you have here......Bravo....! ------------------ - poet FemmeFatale "The strongest man in the world is he who stands most alone..." Henrik Ibsen (1826-1906) Norwegian dramatist lyric poet |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
Yes, YES...Sad but so well written Mark...I sure could relate..  ------------------ "No one was ever ruined from without; The final ruin comes from within." Amelia E. Barr |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Mark, this is very good! I liked the last stanza the best......here's to healing!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
healing takes forever sometimes |
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