Open Poetry #1 |
Wuz & Did Do’s |
Sunshine
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I have a list of wuzzes that I was supposed to do And on the other side a list of Dids I’ve done. Sometimes the wuzzes outdo the dids And to this plea now I’ve come. Lord help me with my wuzzes, for they are a whole list long: I was to help my grandma, I was to sing a song I was to kiss my husband, I was to hug my kid Only two on this list are the ones I did. Lord help me with my wuzzes, they are growing great I was to pray to you before now; I was to fix a gate I was to see a friend, I was to learn how to relate I was to go on a camping trip with my handsome mate. I was to write a letter; I was to pull the weeds; I was to write a poem, I was to see to my needs; I was to get a mammogram, oh Lord hear my plea How can I get these to my list of dids before I fall to my knees? I was to do the dishes, I was to wash the dog I was to get the car lubed, and to remove the kitchen clog I was to bake a cake, and get the cookies done I was to do these things before the setting sun. I was to remember my childhood so my children I would raise right all I did was turn around and my children were adults overnight. I was to set a course for me A course so straight and true And now all I have is me Standing here with my wuzzes before you. For all of the things I’ve done did, and with the wuzzes left to do Lord smile upon me, this woman here, For I’m sure my list is shorter, than the list you did for you. ------------------ Sunshine Words will always express our feelings true. KRJ |
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Balladeer
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This poem is wuzzerful! |
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Sunshine
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The greatest compliment...from Balladeer. It was fun...and I'm sure sure I didn't list all the wuzzes that ever wuz. ------------------ Sunshine Words will always express our feelings true. KRJ |
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Sunshine
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Balladeer - I need your input on a few others done today. See earlier postings. Enjoy. Thanks! ------------------ Sunshine Words will always express our feelings true. KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 07-12-99).] |
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Sundance Member
since 1999-07-11
Posts 123 |
I have pages of wuzzes, and I am only 13!!! I understand u completely. Nicly done! Great job! |
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fjones Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 98MS |
I enjoyed reading the poem. It is cute but still has a lot of meaning . [This message has been edited by fjones (edited 07-13-99).] |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
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Thank you, Sunshine, What a nice gift to send. This is me all over! There is wisdom hidden in this. Sadie |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
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Forgot my library card the first time. OK. Now I have it. Thanks! |
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MulaTTo New Member
since 2004-03-27
Posts 9tempe, az |
B. U. T. FUL |
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