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What There Is Of Me |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
It doesn't matter what I look like, Yet, it matters what I see. And I'm no fashion model, but this is what there is of me. I'm pretty in my own way. Not too heavy, not too thin... I finally can accept my looks and who I am within. Once upon a time I was so lonely and so sad. Once upon a time I longed for things that I already had. Does it matter if I'm pretty? Does it matter if I'm not? In the end, it only matters how much of ourselves we've got. Perhaps I have the gift of verse... and that suits me all too well... If someone took my words from me, dear God, I'd be in Hell... Perhaps my friendship is the best thing that you'll ever get from me. But that's okay because that is what there is of me. Too many years I felt the pain and insecurities... and it was through my own words that I put my mind at ease. And now this self-acceptance has helped me find my soul. I know that it will also help me to reach my goals. So when you look in the mirror, never, ever be ashamed. Who you are and wht you know lie far beyond that pane. See all the gifts inside you. What they are wrapped in is unique. It doesn't matter what you look like... it's what you say when you speak. My words are based on pure concern... don't be the way I used to be. I finally found my way home, and that's what there is of me. ------------------ ~one voice~ For Myself, I live, Live intensely and am fed by life, and my value, whatever it be, is in my own kind of expression of that. *Henry James ©~onevoice~ [This message has been edited by ~one voice~ (edited 07-12-99).] [This message has been edited by ~one voice~ (edited 07-12-99).] |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
The new ending fits well. Thank you my dear, beyond what words can express. ------------------ I am not responsible for how you choose to interpret what I say. DreamEvil© |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
you do in fact have a great gift for verse and not afraid to say so i like that great work |
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Christina Myers Member
since 1999-06-21
Posts 159 |
ah ha! I read this twice just to savor it. Bravo, OneVoice. I myself haven't reached that point yet- but your words still stuck a chord deep in my heart. Thank you. -Christina ------------------ And I thought: this is how poetry is born. It comes from invisible heights, it is secret and dark in its origins, solitary and fragrant, and like the river it will assimilate whatever falls in its current; it will seek a route between the mountains, and its crystalline song will ripple through the meadows."- Pablo Neruda |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Thank you, thank you, thank you! I appreciate your input! And I am glad that you like!  ------------------ ~one voice~ For Myself, I live, Live intensely and am fed by life, and my value, whatever it be, is in my own kind of expression of that. *Henry James |
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Fred Hobbs Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 329Tallahassee, Florida, US |
I've read all your poems one voice. They have all been outstanding but this one especially shows great talent, strength and resolve. sandman |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Awesome, one voice. I think I have reached that point, at least for now. ------------------ *Krista Knutson* "I will sail my vessel 'till the river runs dry, like a bird upon the wind, these waters are my sky..." Garth Brooks |
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Crystal Member
since 1999-07-24
Posts 62Hazel Park Mi U.S.A. |
I think it is really great when someone has such great self-confidence. It is a wonder where life can take you once you realize how unique and beautiful each and everyone of us are. |
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Delores Hall Member
since 1999-07-16
Posts 342USA |
Beautiful poem.Because I'm busy with the kids and home all day,I don't always look my best. But when a certain someone says I should put some makeup on.I ask why. I'm not out to impress anyone.I feel I have nothing to prove and I'm happy with the way I look.So I understand where you are coming from.Happy writing. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautifully expressed....one should never have to change themselves for anyone but themselves! |
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