Open Poetry #1 |
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Pink Pearl |
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DaveS New Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 5Hawthorne, CA, Los Angeles |
Pink Pearl by DaveS Somewhere down the rocky coast She sits with her Pink Pearl eraser. Doggedly she scrubs and blows; Sweeps the crumbs on painted toes; Horizons raised, once drawn too low. The image cleared begins to chase her Far away and long ago. Scotch plaid blanket, wine on toast, Neutral pants with blue-black blazer, Alone atop this large sheer stone, Prepared to face time on her own, A perfect rose sits smartly clothed, Precisely as her mother raised her, Presentable if overflown. The lady's mind absorbs the scene: Waves crash upon the marble mesas, Unchanged since times before the sea, First time impinged by pink debris, A part of her once more released, New remnants of the face she traces, Replacing scars she can't delete: Impressions no Pink Pearl erases. |
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~one voice~ Senior Member
since 1999-07-08
Posts 664Billings, MT USA |
Wow... DaveS, I do find talent in your writing. I find it beautifully descriptive. I am looking forward to reading more of your work. ------------------ ~one voice~ For Myself, I live, Live intensely and am fed by life, and my value, whatever it be, is in my own kind of expression of that. *Henry James |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family! Liked this one a lot! Very descriptive with a lot of good creative phrases. Bring on more! ![]() |
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