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Lucie
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0 posted 1999-09-15 01:41 PM


I’m dying friends you just don’t know
each day I laugh out loud at Toe.
And Balladeer he cracks me up
sometimes I think I’ll bust a gut.

My stomach hurts from Long John’s reply
about the preferences of our Evil guy.
If I should die laughing before this ends
donate my funny bone to my friend.

DreamEvil you will need it now
they are gonna get you soon, somehow.
Toe and ‘Deer won’t stand aside.
Quickly friend go run and hide.

© Copyright 1999 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
LngJhnAg
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1 posted 1999-09-15 02:18 PM


Dreamie - hide out in the produce section - I've a friend there who will smuggle you into the underground.

Nice poem, lil Lucie

suthern
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2 posted 1999-09-15 02:29 PM


Good job, Lucie... but somehow I can't quite picture DE running away in fear? Or trusting LJA's recommendations? LOL
Justbleu
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3 posted 1999-09-15 02:38 PM


Nice poem...was cute!!
This place makes me laugh and cry!!

I love it!!!

Justbleu

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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"

Poet deVine
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4 posted 1999-09-15 05:19 PM


I think he should stand up and accept his fate.....with a smile on his face! (we smile at the shenanigans all the time!)
caroline
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5 posted 1999-09-15 05:26 PM


Never underestimate the power of a Dream...heheheh...

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The only man worth your tears will never make you cry...

Elizabeth
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6 posted 1999-09-15 05:29 PM


Well, they say what goes around comes around. Hahahaha. Cute poem Lucie.

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*Elizabeth*

"Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low,
But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..."


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