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Iloveit
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0 posted 1999-09-15 10:21 AM


you know I can't really handle reality
right now,
can't I just skip today?
she says to the sun and hides
her head in the pillow
my head hurts and
I think its because of the
leak in my eyes
that I am pretty sure
stems from the ache
in my heart
that I could almost bet
is because it is
so empty


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© Copyright 1999 Iloveit - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 1999-09-15 10:24 AM


This is a good start to a continuation...

so I'll be watching...



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Sunshine
Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ
Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow



Iloveit
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2 posted 1999-09-15 10:28 AM


thanks, sunshine, my life is in such turmoil right now, that I hope the continuation is better than the present.....
suthern
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3 posted 1999-09-15 10:34 AM


Nope (shaking head) if I have to get up and go play slave to the werk monster, so do you.... so roll your lazy hairy self out of that bed and quit feeling sorry for you before I give you a sore bohunkus to howl about! *G*

Love your poem, O&O... and hope tomorrow is a better day... right now, though, don't think about tomorrows... just take one day at a time! *S* That heart isn't empty... I've experienced its generosity!

Iloveit
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4 posted 1999-09-15 10:40 AM


*peaking out from the covers and whining* do I gotta?.........

and... I don't know what a bohunkus is lol, but I don't think I want a sore one.....

thanks o&o hope you have a good day too!

RainbowGirl
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5 posted 1999-09-15 11:07 AM


Iloveit: I think you're creating a rainbow my friend...

Big HUSG

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


Iloveit
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6 posted 1999-09-15 11:13 AM


thanks rg, don't know what I would do without you guys!

big hugs

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 1999-09-15 11:24 AM


ILoveit,
Many people have tried in different ways
But the only way is to get up and face the day.
Enjoyed the read.

Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
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Southern Florida
8 posted 1999-09-15 01:47 PM


very well written...but I have to agree with everyone above.....you have to face the day

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Iloveit
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9 posted 1999-09-15 01:53 PM


come on.....I thought you guys were my friends...not one of you told me, yep...just bury your head and forget the world, you deserve to wallow in self pity for the day....hey.....maybe that's just it....you all are my friends thanks for making me smile :-)
Mr. Cucumber
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10 posted 1999-09-15 01:55 PM


Iloveit - please don't get up - lets snuggle a little longer.... eg
Iloveit
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11 posted 1999-09-15 02:03 PM


well hello Mr. Cucumber, I don't think we have been formally introduced, and I don't cuddle with strangers.....lol....well not too often anyway, and not so's I'd admit it...lol....and yep, cuddling under the covers with a ahemmmm "cucumber" would just about make my day today....*sticks out her hand* *ng*
LngJhnAg
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12 posted 1999-09-15 02:12 PM


Lovey - watch out for Mr. Cucumber - he only wants one thing from you... trust me, I know him well *wink*
Iloveit
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13 posted 1999-09-15 02:22 PM


lol, yep, I see by the IP addresses that you do know him well....and *raised eyebrows* just what might that one thing be, Mr....ummm I mean LJ? I mean since you seem to know him so well....

lolol

Justbleu
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14 posted 1999-09-15 02:43 PM


LOL!!! Too cute!!

Am happy to hear you're smiling now....

It will all get better!!!

Justbleu

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"Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???"

Mr. Cucumber
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15 posted 1999-09-15 03:09 PM


Do not listen to that scalawag Long John - the only thing I want is to be squeezed real tight in a nice warm place. All these bumps on my skin need to be squezzed flat - preferably at the same time - lol
hoot_owl_rn
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16 posted 1999-09-15 07:09 PM


Iloveit....I can relate to this one. Sometimes it's easier to not get out of bed and just let the day go on without you, at least for a bit anyway

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

Isis
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Sunny Queensland
17 posted 1999-09-15 07:22 PM


I was gonna cheer you up but now I don't think I have to everyone else got there ahead of me. Always try to face the day with excitement and wonder, nothing comes from burying yourself under.......
A new day brings the opportunity of new happiness..
Sorry,,, I'm a quoteaholic today..::

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Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels.
~Isis~



WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
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18 posted 1999-09-15 08:51 PM


I think we all want to wallow under the covers for a day. But good thing you have friends that won't let you!!
JTF
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19 posted 1999-09-16 03:30 AM


Lovey, don't forget to ask Mr Cucumber his full name ... I've been told his first is "Grated"

Hang on and the rainbow will shine ...

passing shadows
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displaced
20 posted 2004-04-23 01:46 PM


I know how you feel
Artic Wind
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21 posted 2007-11-11 12:18 PM


it is always good to express your feelings on paper

ARCTIC WIND

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