Open Poetry #2 |
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Here I Am |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart ![]() |
Here I Am Can you hear me? Here I am, by your side, in your thoughts, and in your heart riding along with you, my love of you forever wide and from Me, child, you cannot hide. No, I’m not the daunting form I seem to take just because my silent words seem to quake the substance below you ~ you’ll not fall; just nod your head, yes, you’ve heard my call. I see here now, as I look inside your soul that your heart seems weary, yes, I’ve given it a toll and you have not given this burden back to me; well now of course you’re weary, and why I can see. What have I spoken about in the past? I can give you healing that will last, all you need do is give back to me the love I’ve given you, don’t you see? Now, I’ll not chastise, for it’s only purely human to want to deal with your problems through acumen but for My sake, as well as for yours, dear child come to Me with the problems, either raving or mild. I won’t guarantee a quick fix, rather a lifting of heart so take those selfish burdens from life’s cart and place them for safe-keeping here in my hands then go on to enhance life’s greater demands. Can you hear me? Here I am, by your side, in your thoughts, and in your heart riding along with you, my love of you forever wide and from Me, child, you cannot hide. 15 September, 1999 ©KRJ ------------------ Sunshine Words will always express our feelings true. ~~~ KRJ Look, then, into thine heart, and write ~~~ Henry Wadsworth Longfellow |
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Paul Allen Lupien Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 114Ferndale,Mi.USA |
Can't imagine why nobody has responded to this,Sunshine.Personally,I am thinking about your words.Swore that I wouldn't trust Faith again-but,well...maybe. Anyway,you got me to think about trying. Paul ------------------ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This is for your daughter, right,Sunshine? It's very well done. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Your daughter is a lucky girl sunshine, beautifully done. Children bring out the best in us all don't they? : ------------------ Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels. ~Isis~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, I rarely miss one of your posts. I don't know how I missed this one. I agree with Balladeer This one is very well done. *L* |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Loved it... |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Sunshine you are a good mother! Would have loved to be able to do that with mine. Great poem!!! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
How peaceful this is... ![]() HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Paul, thank you for letting me know that this touched you so; 'Deer, amazing how life's problems, and possible solutions, end up being "everyone's"; no, this was not for my daughter. It is for "everyone". Isis, Sy, Severn, Whtdove, Rainbow...thank you all. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes... you are |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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