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juanita
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since 1999-08-13
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Los Angeles, CA, USA

0 posted 1999-09-14 09:01 PM


The days go by...
Memories fade away
Time seems to stand still
Nowhere to go
Don't want to stay...

Strange desires
Disturb my soul
Finding no rest
Not-here
Not-there

You chose distance
And I, letting go
Dreams are but dreams
Then morning comes!

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Denise
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Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-09-14 09:34 PM


Very lovely, juanita! I enjoyed this!

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Denise

Severn
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

2 posted 1999-09-14 11:13 PM


Short and oh-so sweet.
juanita
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since 1999-08-13
Posts 68
Los Angeles, CA, USA
3 posted 1999-09-16 02:03 AM


Thank you Denise & Severn for your reply
to my poem, is very encouraging.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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displaced
4 posted 2004-04-23 01:47 PM


I understand
Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
5 posted 2007-11-11 12:19 PM


I also understand lol

ARCTIC WIND

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