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It's 12:20, and rain is falling.
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It's 12:20, and rain is falling. |
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Richard 33 Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 187glen easton, wv usa |
It's 12:20 am, and rain is falling,it's sound is so relaxing as it hits the roof. The soft light of my lamp by my computer lights my way. as I touch the keys I think of you. I hang onto every word you type in anticipation, anxiously awaiting your reply. You are so far away, but never have you been so close. My mind is racing, do you feel the same way as I do? Secret one that I admire so, I would gladly stand in the rain, if I could only embrace you. I have never seen such spirited beauty, such sincere expression. If by some chance I am only dreaming, it is one from which I do not want to emerge, or be awakened! Cyber love has blossomed in my soul. I would be flying to heights untold, if it was only you I could hold. [This message has been edited by Richard 33 (edited 09-15-99).] |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Wow!!! I felt those sweet things not so long ago!!! But, it was only a dream!! Enjoy, and I hope the joy and happiness last!!!! Very nice!!!  Love and friendship can be so magical!!! Justbleu  ------------------ "Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???" |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beatifully done, who's the lucky one? New love is there anything sweeter? : ------------------ Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels. ~Isis~ |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I have to say more....I read this again and it brought tears to my eyes!! Some of the words you write and feel are things that were shared between my last love and I!! It was a love so sweet, and one I will not forget easily!! God bless you both, and stay dreaming forever!! Thanks again!! Justbleu ------------------ "Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???" |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Ah, the thoughts that run through a man's head when he's alone at night....fabulously exquisite... This is one of your most touching poems I've read...very very heartfelt...great job! ***curtsies ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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susieQ_luccier New Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 9central illinois |
I remember feeling this way once,but then my heart was broken by a cyber love. I never want to be there again. I hope yours works for you. good luck! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Aww! Cyber love. This was sweet! |
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Richard 33 Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 187glen easton, wv usa |
Thank you all so much. It is true it was from the heart. I've been divorced for a year, and a half, and never thought I would feel this way again. I don't know whether it will work or not, I'm not even sure she knows that she's the one. |
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Mr. Cucumber Junior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 18 |
Richard Don't worry, she will be safe with me. lol just kidding - new love is always so intense - the real goal is to keep it new. Good luck in your relationship. |
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Richard 33 Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 187glen easton, wv usa |
hee hee, ho ho ho, ha ha. I appreciate your humor, I think you are absolutely right, I just hope she recognizes herself!!! [This message has been edited by Richard 33 (edited 09-15-99).] |
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Paul Allen Lupien Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 114Ferndale,Mi.USA |
Ahh Richard-be bold-State her name.Nothing as wasted as love unexpressed.Unless a dream will satisfy-be bold!No response can come without a proper address.Address your desire and hope... Hey,but what do I know? PAL ------------------ |
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Richard 33 Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 187glen easton, wv usa |
I made the choice & that's what I just did. If she didn't know before, she will know now. I just hope I did the right thing, don't want to ruin a good friendship !!! |
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