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A Beginning |
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johnt300 Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 214san diego, ca. |
A Beginning When we leave here, May our souls rest Side by side, Wander in and out Of time, Freely from mountain To stream to sea. May we live within Each others soul, No more regrets Of all that was Said, No more regrets Of all that was Done. Soaring through our New world, No voices to speak, One mind, One thought, We surround ourselves With one another. We make up for time lost, And love each other To no end. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Very metaphysical! I like it! |
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johnt300 Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 214san diego, ca. |
Thank you again. I have dug up an old floppy disc of poems that I liked enough to keep, and I'm glad that I did. I am very happy to find out that it can be enjoyed by others. I sure enjoyed writing them, and when I read them back to myself, for the most part I have a good feeling about them. But after a while you start to wonder if you haven't forced them to grow on yourself, if only to pat yourself on the back. I love seeing others enjoy it, too. I wish I knew about this site six months ago. There is some really awesome work at this site, and I'm glad a few awesome poets actually like my poems. I guess that's a long enough post this time around. Thanks again, all. Tyson |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Well, you're very welcome here! Keep digging them up, OK?  |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
I agree with Severn, keep sharing these 'older' poems from disc. I loved this one. ------------------ Words that enlighten the soul are more precious than jewels. ~Isis~ |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Cool Poem!! Keep them coming!!!!! Thanks!! Justbleu ------------------ "Is she living in a dream, Is she playing make-believe???" |
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johnt300 Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 214san diego, ca. |
severn, isis, justbleu, Thank you for your replies. I hope to have something new up within a week or two. Til then.... Tyson |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Tyson...this is absolutely beautiful. Your words are so sincerly spoken. It would have been a terrible shame had this one been lost and not shared for our viewing pleasure. ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Keep them coming Tyson! I loved this one. ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." |
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johnt300 Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 214san diego, ca. |
Hoot, Thanks a lot. I'm glad you liked it. Tyson |
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johnt300 Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 214san diego, ca. |
Elizabeth, Thank you very much. I hope to keep them coming. Hope to see more from you, too. Tyson |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
....um....yep - This is a good one for sure - Now I have to go find the rest of your posts... scuse me - putting on my super sleuth costume...  |
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johnt300 Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 214san diego, ca. |
Thank you, Nan. And thank you for finding the others, too. Take care. Tyson |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Beautiful, Tyson...you definitely add to my reading pleasure here at PiP. Glad you found us ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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johnt300 Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 214san diego, ca. |
Hi Caroline, Thank you. I was lucky enough to have this site recommended to me from a good friend. I am very glad you liked this. Bye. Tyson |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Tyson, I had to reply to this yet another time as I have come back and read it numerous times since your posting. It is so romantically beautiful...isn't that what true love is all about, no regrets, no need for words? ------------------ "In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus |
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johnt300 Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 214san diego, ca. |
Hoot, That is what true love is about, yes. Thank you for another kind reply. I am assuming you are online. See you in a minute or two, hopefully. Tyson |
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Paul Allen Lupien Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 114Ferndale,Mi.USA |
This one kinda gave me a free-feeling rush.A floaty kind of flying fun sensation.Love the metaphysical stuff. PAl ------------------ |
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johnt300 Member
since 1999-09-12
Posts 214san diego, ca. |
Paul, Thank you! That's a great compliment. Take care. Tyson |
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