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Open Poetry #2

rising above the shore

Sundance
Member

since 1999-07-11

Posts 123

0 posted 1999-09-14 09:26 PM

the clouds that rise above the shore,
flost swiftly by and forevermore,
shall be a part of the nature in me,
the really wants to make you see,
that life is really a silent storm,
that rages when your in the norm,
and trying to hide what is really there,
moving around and really doesn't care.
why don't you belive me now?
and will you ever really know how,
to love me with your whole heart in mind,
and will you ever really find,
the way to do this without hurt,
and will I ever be alert,
to the fact that you and I,
shall see the clounds way up high,
and will be different forevermore,
adifferent sea, and a different shore.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-09-14 09:28 PM

Another good one!

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Denise

Sundance
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since 1999-07-11

Posts 123

2 posted 1999-09-14 09:29 PM

thanks again, I am on a poetry craze!

Sundance
Member

since 1999-07-11

Posts 123

3 posted 1999-09-15 08:19 PM

anyone else?

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

4 posted 1999-09-15 08:27 PM

Again, nicely done piece. I liked the flow to this one.

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"In the depths of winter, I finally learned that there was in me an invincible summer" ~Albert Camus

Emmy
Member

since 1999-06-29

Posts 194
KY

5 posted 1999-09-16 06:39 PM

I TOLD ya this was one of your best!!! This has got to be my favorite of yours. Wonderfully done, "Sundance"

Sundance
Member

since 1999-07-11

Posts 123

6 posted 1999-09-19 04:30 PM

Thanks u guys~

Sundance
Member

since 1999-07-11

Posts 123

7 posted 1999-09-19 05:04 PM

anyone else?

Artur Hawkwing
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since 1999-06-30

Posts 444
USA

8 posted 1999-09-19 05:08 PM

Wow, just how do you do it?

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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9 posted 2004-04-23 12:44 PM

I like this one

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